All Comments on 'The Alleyway'

I enjoyed your story so far and am looking forward to reading more.

Very nice lead in. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. You did a great job catching and holding my interest and then leaving me wanting more. Nice

Thanks for the feedback. The story I feel is a proof of concept towards a larger story involving this girl's awakening with monsters. The praise is appreciated. I will work on making a full story in the near future, though I don't know if I'll post it here...or even publish it. We'll see.

You write well with keen understanding of the many ways to capture a readers fascination.

You must continue this story! Please! ❤️