All Comments on 'The Allotment Ch. 02'

Loved this story as well as the first one, and hope it can be continued with more chapters

Reading about a man watching another man fuck his wife is hot. Having him stick his cock all the way in and squirting his cum where it really does the most good is even better. But having his wife get pregnant while he watches and beats his meat is the best. Made my cock hard. Thanks.

But I was hoping that they would both fuck her at the same time, I suppose that would remove the cuckold slant. Now that she's pregnant I guess that the story finishes.

I look forward to your next submission!

guilt? oh please. if you like to watch your wife getting fucked, there's no guilt to it. this is a stupid story. if you are going for this fetish, you and your wife better be truthful to each other. that or just say goodbye to each other.

The sex is sizziling hot and all but what is it about british men wanting to see their wives fuck other men lots of times... maybe someone should ask Gary APB

Writers express their innermost desires, and disfunctions, in their writing. This writer is telling everyone he's a wimp husband and craves humiliation. So sad. But as a previous comment referred to, it's almost the norm for Brits these days. The good news is this "writer" can recover his manhood with some good psychological analysis and intense therapy. Get that now, Lucy. Be a man again.

excellent fiction(or is it not fiction)well written and loved it all more please

You've done it again! Better than "Allotment 1," but for me, not as sexy as "At the conference, Ch 2." Still, I love your two main characters, because really, he's just a dirty old man who gets off on his horny wife's adventures. For those readers who don't approve-- quit reading Loving Wives stories. And remember, we all have our own little secret desires that we're unable to act upon.

You have it all in this one.. The conflicted feelings, the anger, the shame, the arousal that pulls you back to the commanding older man who knows the longings of certain younger couples. You must continue.

English self cucking seems to be a sport there by the stories and positive comments from England and Europe - puzzling.<P>

They enjoy the helpless mixed feeling of wife pimp and husband wimp appearently as their's is a need to be mentaly disrespected and self disrespected by as base a subhuman below convention act as possible. Feel bad and deeply sick to feel better? <P>

Doesn't make sense does it, but they are entitled to be as grossly disgusting and repugnant as necessary to get excited. I do wonder if they realize that their addiction is severe and how will they rev themself up in time when they are suddenly deadened and numb to that perversion [real or fantasy?]???

A sordid fetish below most and just the way they like it eh.

Good story. We'll written. I hope you don't make us wait 3 more months for the next chapter.

Thanks.

But it confuses me why people spend time reading and critizising stories they _know_ is not their genre. Their project seem to be to stop people from writing "old man takes young wife"-stories.

A mystery.

Anyway, quite a few of us enjoy this topic. And this story is very good.

The only thing I disliked was the final words: "The end".

Why not "to be continued"?

I would like to read about Dericks growing dominance in the threesome.

And to see Sarah leave Allen for Derick...

simply fantastic story, keep up the wonderfully sexy writing

fantastic, hurry with the sequel

Derick want her ..... I want to see it .... Thanks !

fantastic stuff

The sexiest thing ever is a horny young woman taken by a dirty old man in his late 60s or 70s.

Lucy,

A very hot and well written story! Please don't end it here, room for much more of this trio. Great job - THANKS!!!

Dave Martin

Willcox, Arizona

you have to follow this up its got lots of scope for more

rather average for this genre. I don't quite understand about her getting pregnant. They didn't seem to have any worries about that happening beforehand. It's almost as if they didn't realize that fucking can lead to pregnancy. Surely they aren't that stupid or ignorant? And, what is with Derick always calling her "Las"? Is that some sort of nickname? At first, I kept finding that I was reading it as the plural of "la", the musical note. Then, I decided that it was short for "lass", it just doesn't read that way.

super story i loved it we want more

I'm really enjoying this saga! Looking forward to chapter 3. Furthermore, as the hubby in my first story ("Kate's Date With Destiny") finds out, one needs to be careful about for what one wishes!

One of the best on here. loved the conversations, the descriptions, the words used EVERYTHING please write more

Another enjoyable read that put me in Allen's position thinking of me watching my wife with another. My thoughts however were not of jealousy and rage but of pure passion to the point of walking in and joining them. The ending, although not surprised would ccertainly have to be a result to consider, although n my personal situation, not an issue. Well done!

great story the older bull getting into the sexy young wifes knickers as her husband watches with the end result that these fuckings allways have thats with the older bull putting the sexy young wifes tummy in the family way , with his baby growing in the wifes slut cervix that he pumped full of his potent thick spunk as the sexy wife came all over his old fat cock as the cuck hub watched his sexy young wife impregnated by her lover

I can really relate to all three characters' thoughts and feelings, especially in this chapter, except at the very end. My husband gave me to our own "old codger" next door, but he wanted us to play pregnancy roulette. One of them knocked me up and we didn't know who until our little girl came out with red hair. The old codger gave me a right good fucking when he found out he was a Dad again, intent on reseeding me...which he eventually did, to my husband's thrill. I love stories of young wives and old codgers. They bring back so many memories. (Sigh)

What a stupid fucking British cuck, whore, and bastard story.

Nothing new here. Husband goes brain dead and let’s wife sleep with another man. He is an idiot because he doesn’t get anything out of it but becoming yet another worthless cuckold. Why would he stay with her if she is pregnant with another mans child and how truly moronic does she have to be to get pregnant? Loser couple and nothing here but a slut and cuck

Brilliant story.

The above comments are those of scumbags. Well done Lucy 54

Sad to think the little bastard is going to grow up without a father and living with his divorced mother in a welfare hovel - just another delinquent come criminal. Males after 50 yrs of age should be forced to have vasectomies, and females after 40 yrs of age should be forced to have their tubes tied - married, widowed, divorced or single. Everyone gets done!

Then you can all go about "making mistakes" without destroying other people's lives!

Bring back the rocks! Lying, cheating, manipulating, deceiving, adulterous whores should all be stoned - to death. Male predators chasing married women need to be fully-castrated on the spot.

Excellent, but it's "Lass"!