All Comments on 'The Arrangement Ch. 03'

I like that the action seems to be picking up. Cool.

I liked the background and the introduction of a bad guy.

Can't wait for more.

very nice very nice, hmm hoping Ayden turns out to be a really special one( thinking of marcus' remark that A was already so strong as a youngling)

Another great chapter. Marcus is a nasty piece of work. Still, I think he is a bit silly too. I can only imagine what Ayden will do if Marcus tries to or does hurt Jade.

I had an idea of something bad

it would be horrible if Marcus had Ayden tied up with silver unable to save Jade as she was raped and turned by Marcus and Julia then he would have to help her through the change! what do you think?

Marcus is a very bad vampire, LOL. I like him. As poor Jade is about to find out, when all seems perfect, that is when the rug gets pulled out from under you.

Uh oh naughty vampires mis-behaving might be in for a nasty surprise hmmm.