All Comments on 'The Artifact Ch. 03'

Love your development of the story line and the characters. The sex is good and yes I would also enjoy additional details with the deepening plot. Oh you have to continue this story in Mind Control thru the joining of the Magic. Kudos.

Hopefully we don't have to wait too much longer for the next installment

i do hate waiting for a next chapter...especially if the writing is so good as yours is.

I will always take care of you started 2009 seven chapters unfinished . the artefact started 2009 chapters 1 and two . Five year gap to chapter 3 2014 still unfinished.it's so frustrating when reading the stories waiting and waiting and waiting for the next chapter that near comes . My question to you doc87123 is , are you gonna finish these twoT brilliant stories before I die ??????? If you're not going to give these stories closure why in the hell do you write them in the first place .. Finish what you started. And I don't mean in 10 years time.

According to the Story Index for this Author, Ch. 03 was posted 10/19/14 . But some of the comments to this chapter are dated as early as 12/25/09. How is that possible?

I also read the comment by the author relating health issues as a reason for the delay in the continuation.

"I've been in either a hospital or skilled nursing facility for a total of more than a year and a half. I've been unable to write due the medication I've been taking. "

I certainly hope the author's health is improving and Ch. 04 will be forthcoming. It is too intriguing a tale for it to not keep going.

This is really good stuff. I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to chapter 4. Please hurry. First story ever that also involves something else other than pure sex. Also love your style of writing.

Keep it up!!

I've been waiting for more but it never comes, WHY? Write more anything but I want more of this series. Thank you for this series but I want more of it!

When can we expect the new chapters. This is the best

Good Story but you haven't added any for a long time I hope you don't just stop and leave us hanging!!!!!

Brilliant stories, good plots even without the sex, have enjoyed reading all you have posted here and hope you one day get the time and inspiration to write again.

Until that day comes I will just have to wait In anticipation of your next burst of activity.

Thank you for the stories you have posted.

I found the whole story to be well written and quite enjoyable and for the most part every part is written to make it sound to be quite real in nature. Though it is not as sexually stimulating as some stories here it is quite interesting to me and my friends who have read the whole three chapters so far. We are hoping that you continue with the rest of the story soon, as it has captured our interest.

Definitely keeping my interest...waiting for more!!!

Oh great one, I beseech thee as your humble servant. You have lead us to this point and we have traveled with you willingly. Are we to bivouac down to await further orders or are we to Charlie Mike without you? Pray tell, how will we fare while waiting for another installment of your lifeline? Please do not dawdle, but instead be quick footed and continue this tale as my mind is wandering about.

(irrev)

I am truly impressed! Very few stories keep me absolutely engrossed. This was definitely one of the best.

Well so far the story has kept my attention riveted, I even find myself jumping ahead over the sex scenes to find out what happens next...

I just read all 3 chapters in about 1 hour, and would love to read more.

Thanks for the good read!!

This story definitely has the potential to be the next "Last Tritan" keep up the good work, I'll be making sure to keep checking in for the next chapter in the story 👍

Continue this story. It's very good!

This story needs to be continued to its conclusion!

This Story is realy realy good doc. The Sex Scenes aren't really even Important (although a highly appreciated addition) because the Story line is so good. I hope you are able to continue This Story soon and to it's conclusion.

The story line is awesome and the sex is great. I hope the rest I coming soon!

One of the best story's I've ever read

Great work the story is very compelling :)

Hello, great story well written can't wait for the next chapters please hurry I've been dying you for years

Such a good story. I do hope you will exert your considerable talents for the next episode!

Great story. We need the rest of it asap.

I just stumbled upon this story and found it very interesting. Please can I have some more ? ;-}

Enjoying the series want more pls

Is there any chance that this is an active series? I am hooked on the story and would love to hear more. It is very well set up.

Looking forward for the another chapter of this series please continue this series

Need to see more to this story

Awaiting the next one

You do good work. Two things I would suggest to get a bit more exposure is to change your alias to something more memorable and to branch out more into the more popular genres rather than posting a majority of your work into mind control /hypnosis. Not to say you should change your work all that much (This series could easily be reclassified as sci fi/ fantasy for example). Also get an editor to help polish out the minor errors that you make with relative consistency (missing or unfinished words etc.)

Keep up the good work, looking forward to part 4.

Unfortunately, I like many others wish this to continue but seeing as this chapter was posted in 2014, and it was the last post of this author I have my doubts

The author mentioned a surgery he has to go through in his biography. Maybe he passed. Sad.

Even as it is hard to believe that it will happen, I would be very happy to see this story continue!

Very nice ideas, details and writing!

Thank you ... look forward to the next part of your story

Sent the link to your story for other friends to enjoy ... must read in my opinion

Hi good story but you got a 1 one the last part because you never finished it hope you come back to it

Keep the good work up,I would like to know what happens next.

Waiting for Chapter 4.

5 stars. That was great. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapters. I hope your surgery went well but am a little worried that you haven't been back to the site since 2012. I hope everything's OK.

Moved it so far..... don’t stop

Chapter 4?

Stories like this make me wish there was someone good enough to pick up the incompletes and finish them. Like an author dedicated to pick up and finish where authors have passed away or just quit the site. It's been 6 years with no other works from this guy and that makes me sad. Here's to hoping.

gave it 5 * like all the other chapters. need to end it though please.

Wish this would have continued