All Comments on 'The Auction Ch. 2'

by jillbird

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SubleeSubleeover 14 years ago
Felt sorry!

I felt sorry for Jill, she didn't sign up for what she got, and it definitely was not agreed too. I thought maybe the ending would have some merit, but I was disappointed

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
he might still have his wife

's body but the woman he fell in love with is long gone.

MORAL ............ STAY AWAY FROM LAP DANCING CLUBS!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Loved this!

This is a very erotic tale, of a woman who loses her mind during an extreme sex show.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

And the next day Jill hired herself a lawyer and filed to divorce her useless vile husband, and filed civil and criminal charges against the club and Harry. When the volunteer turned out to be a well connected judge from a nearby state the DA refused to prosecute, so she hired a hitman who blew Harry away and then torched the club. Now that's a story!

tranzmanytranzmanyover 8 years ago
Eh....

Is it bad that I enjoyed Anon's ending better?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
best of the best

jill bird is the best of the best.

her stuff is a trip into the edge of reason.

there are more out there but difficult to find.

but well worth searching for.

WargamerWargamerabout 4 years ago

Yep, 1/5. The wife divorces the wimp husband, and cleans him out with the divorce settlement. Club members are charged with assault, sexual assault and rape. The main offenders are gaoled for five plus years, the Club owners are sued Personally and are forced into bankruptcy.

Jill makes oodles of cash and drives off into the sunset, richer and wiser

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