All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

This is a very erotic read! Sure to arouse! Great job!

A great first effort, hot and steamy. Hope you can find time to write some more along this kind of theme.

This was an excellent story for your 1st one... I wish you had made it longer... Please keep writing...

Very hot story, i am a child care provider. That would be so hot for something like that to happen. Great story. Hope you right more.

Could have been better. He needed to make a baby with the babysitter.

Great story, made me wish I was 18 again and showing off for the very first time. Look forward to reading more of your stories in the future - Kay

Very talented- sexy story; keep on doing this

The story was hot. A little short and you could probably have used an editor. In the one scene you went to the kitchen to get a soda, came back with an iced tea and drank a coke. That was the only bad thing I noticed.

Very erotic, and without birth control. You shoud write more of this one with her getting pregnant, and of course staying on after you have fucked her.

So she gets a soda that becomes and ice tea that becomes a coke... hmm. You're a good writer but you could use an editor.

I loved reading this, it's very erotic. I wouldn't mind seeing a second encounter, if you've got one.

Pretty good story, and a nice writing style, until the end. That sucked.

I thought it was quite good but with a young girl you should have had a condom on especially as she was a virgin. That is bad form.