All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Ch. 06'

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MsTaylorMsTayloralmost 11 years ago
great chapter

I can't wait to read about Petra kicking his ass lmao

nadaliwnadaliwalmost 11 years ago
I like it....

please write more about the women.

willieonewillieonealmost 11 years ago
Great chapter but

The story didn't advance much. Sam still hasn't met her mate face to face, nor has V and her mate there is so much that needs to go forward and all we have read is a meeting being interupted for a fight. So found this chapter somewhat frustrating and a tad to short. Just sayin' would loved to have seen it advance more as I do love this story and look forward to Sam and Blake finally meeting properly they are a great match.

redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

never thought of it the way halea did when she described being turned against your will as a prison.

spearishspearishalmost 11 years ago
Great writing

Would love a bit more depth though on how the abused women are coping with the wolves surrounding them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

The only thing that annoys me in your story is the lack of descriptions of suroundings and people. Please work on that a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
love it .....

love the story so far and hope that sam is able to bring the pups out of their wolf forms , i cant wait to see what happens next to and has igor's bitten of more then he can cew please dont leave it so long between chapters . :)

maxd01maxd01almost 11 years ago
Evening

I am greatly enjoying the story but really wish each chapter was longer. I would cheefuly wait a bit longer for each chapter if they were longer. This one sort of seemed a bit short. It should have been resolved with the other Alpha's getting his ass kicked and shredded before having his throat ripped out.

mrtdustmrtdustalmost 11 years ago
HI hopeless

can you please let us know when the next chapter is going to be posted please

HopelesslyAddictedHopelesslyAddictedalmost 11 years agoAuthor
more chapters

I do have plenty of this story written but none in electronic form so my editor can read it over. My computer croaked and I don't have the money to replace it. My internet has been off, another cutback, so I'm kind of stuck at the moment. As soon as I am able to get some chapters up I will but right now I do not have a timetable.

willieonewillieoneover 10 years ago
Is it me?

Everytime I favourite an author or story the chapters dry up!! I must be a jinx, I may have to stop making awesome authors my favourites and not put their stories into my favourite stories list. That way we may get more from them than months,years of waiting. :(

willieonewillieoneover 10 years ago

January 2014 STILL waiting, surely you have a friend that can help you get your story posted!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
Darn

I really liked this story! Where, oh where have you gone?

HopelesslyAddictedHopelesslyAddictedover 10 years agoAuthor
im back

My editor has gifted me with the use of her tablet so im back look for some more here within the next day or two!!!!

Redheaded_1Redheaded_1about 10 years ago
Hooray!

I am excited and look forward to reading more!

willieonewillieonealmost 10 years ago
Thanks to your Editor!!!!

Your editor is now on the top of my favourite people, I have been going mad waiting for more of this amazing tale and will be checking daily,weekly for updates. Woo Hoo!

willieonewillieonealmost 10 years ago
what happened??

Just noticed the date of your I'm Back comment that was back in January when you told us to check back in a day of so well it is now June and still no update so what happened?

Speedy1106Speedy1106almost 10 years ago
Waiting

We are still waiting. Just curious when and if you will update or not?

chiruzuhenchiruzuhenover 9 years ago
update

really hope to see updates soon, the stories getting good

werewolfsmatewerewolfsmateover 9 years ago
Love it!!!

Please continue the story, I'm really enjoying it!!!

willieonewillieoneover 9 years ago
My Fingers are Crossed!!!

I hope, pray that you get a new laptop for Christmas this year so you can continue this story asap!!! The wait has been much to long!

willieonewillieoneabout 9 years ago
Still waiting

This comment I made last year still stands only it is Feb in 2015. Where is the rest of this story or will it be like most stories on lit and never be finished!!!

Comment from June 2014

Just noticed the date of your I'm Back comment that was back in January when you told us to check back in a day of so well it is now June and still no update so what happened?

HopelesslyAddictedHopelesslyAddictedabout 9 years agoAuthor
Hey there readers!

I finally got a laptop! and I have several chapters up and one edited enough that I am posting it tonight so look for it withing a day or so. It takes at least 24 hours for it to post up.... well it did. Anyway, the other stories will have updates too, maybe not tonight, but I will see how it goes with this one. <3

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