All Comments on 'The Balcony'

Great job! I really enjoyed it! You write very sensuously and vividly! Certainly excited me!

A well-written, sensuous description of a very erotic experience.

Very nice story. You set up both characters well and you gave them real-world feel. I especially like the part with the gut reaction was to move, but you stayed. That brings some confidence to the character, which is incredibly sexy.

I'm not a huge fan of "I and you" stories, nor of 2-person point of view, but you can't please us all with everything. You've set the table with this story, you can do so much more with the woman. Keep writing!