All Comments on 'The Balcony Ch. 01'

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tracysatin over 14 years ago

Hot

I loved it. Please write more along these lines.

Pirate Tregare over 14 years ago

Brilliant

Said it all above. One of the best I've read once things get going. Just the right amount of reality to make it plausible.

yakboy69 over 14 years ago

Well done.

A great story with a nice slow build. I loved the whole noir feel of it. Well done, please do more with this story line.

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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