All Comments on 'The Bar'

Nice start but you can't leave it there. There is so much more to be said. Look forward to much more. There is so much potential left to exploit. Keep going. Please...

I love your work, I just wish you would finish it!!!!!!

That was, well, great! But you can't possibly stop it there! Look into the passion that Mark and Hope share, maybe go into their futures, to see what happens for them! Can't end it yet!