All Comments on 'The Barbeque Ch. 02'

I LOVED this story!!! Loved how he becomes totally submissive to his ex-girlfriend, and then anyone else she tells him to submit to!! A submissive's fantasy!!! Please come back and write more to this story!!!

Just wondering if you thought about a chapter 3 or more. You seemed to have left the door open for more adventures for Tiff.

This was a great continuation of the 1st chapter. I wish I could see all the pictures and the video. Please tell us more and continue with chapters 3 & 4 & more.

Great piece of wanking material you've written. Keep going Hon.

This is one of my biggest fantasies EVER!!! I wish I could enjoy all that Tiffany got to experience. Awesome writing...keep it up, PLEASE!

More more more! This story line is fantastic!

Great series so far. Yes it’s fantasy but, it’s very hot fantasy. I loved both chapters and look forward hopefully to more.💕

hot hot..nice details..boy to girl..YUMMMMMMM

Hope you and Cassie rethink your relationship, you 2 are made for each other. Thought the1st part was best, just the idea of being "forced" to dress to pay off the bet ad take b Cassie was great. Hole i your boy shorts was great. All the rest was a bit too much