All Comments on 'The Barbeque Ch. 02'

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dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

Hope you and Cassie rethink your relationship, you 2 are made for each other. Thought the1st part was best, just the idea of being "forced" to dress to pay off the bet ad take b Cassie was great. Hole i your boy shorts was great. All the rest was a bit too much

robin48robin48over 2 years ago

hot hot..nice details..boy to girl..YUMMMMMMM

SissyTaraSissyTaraover 3 years ago
Great series

Great series so far. Yes it’s fantasy but, it’s very hot fantasy. I loved both chapters and look forward hopefully to more.💕

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

More more more! This story line is fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Incredible...

This is one of my biggest fantasies EVER!!! I wish I could enjoy all that Tiffany got to experience. Awesome writing...keep it up, PLEASE!

PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
The sequel

Great piece of wanking material you've written. Keep going Hon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
loved the sequel

This was a great continuation of the 1st chapter. I wish I could see all the pictures and the video. Please tell us more and continue with chapters 3 & 4 & more.

MichelleWhoIsMichelleWhoIsabout 14 years ago
Good continuation

Just wondering if you thought about a chapter 3 or more. You seemed to have left the door open for more adventures for Tiff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVED IT

I LOVED this story!!! Loved how he becomes totally submissive to his ex-girlfriend, and then anyone else she tells him to submit to!! A submissive's fantasy!!! Please come back and write more to this story!!!

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