All Comments on 'The Basement'

his has a couple of screws that need tightning

Wow someone is ticked off, as a Slave that belongs to someone, i have to say you couldnt be more wrong.

great story loved it ~softsmile~

This story has a sexual tension that gave me chills. It's written with strength. Please Please write more...soo sexy

It's a shame you've not written more, your story is wonderful!

I'd LOVE to read a new, similar story but from the Dom/Sadist point of view, being very specific about what is making Him hard while hurting/ torturing her. Focus on HIS thoughts, feelings and words, as He abuses her, and ramping up as she becomes more agonized, hurt, humiliated while she is becoming more and more aroused, despite the pain. His reactions to her reactions - and how much he enjoys inflicting it.

Great story I hour you write more!!!!!