All Comments on 'The Bastard; Loyal to One Ch. 02'

The word "cocksure" seems fitting for this guy. I'll be interested to see how this pans out - he's competent and canny but he's committed to a very dangerous course in all sorts of ways. Keep him at it

I am enjoying this. Just the one mistake I noticed: I assume when he gets back to camp he goes past the "sentries", rather than the "serenities".