All Comments on 'The Bath'

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Three readers have marked this as favourites so it is clearly hitting the mark with its target audience. I had mixed feelings on this story, I like the plot, and some of the sex scenes are well rendered but I felt description and detail needed bringing out more. On a minor point, the author needs to work on her punctuation and speech marks.

Ie:

"This is not for pleasure yet slut!" "You are still being punished!"

should be:

"This is not for pleasure yet, slut! You are still being punished!"

A good first submission on Literotica.