All Comments on 'The Best Of Both Worlds'

Nice idea for a story... needs development in the centre of the story though - feelings as clothes are taken off, more about how they reacted, what's going on in your mind, etc. This part of the story is always going to be the most erotic, so needs to be expanded and milked more than this.

Still, worth a 5X

... a story, no background and no tension points.