All Comments on 'The Best Reunion'

by Trebor1186

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Flip flops...

"and the wife, although a little nervous perhaps, was excited also."

"and the wife, well she was excited too, I think."

So was she? or wasn't she?

You need to be more clear.

jusdafaxjusdafaxover 12 years ago
Don't give up your day job.

Sorry piece of badly written garbage. "Come on in, have a seat, have a drink, have my wife. Gotta go now? Bye, don't be a stranger." See, I wrote your story, with about the same level of character development and didn't take nearly as much space. Bah!

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