All Comments on 'The Bitch Ch. 02'

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Rudy JamesRudy Jamesover 19 years ago
Revving-up a little...

Developing nicely. Though it sometimes seems that the story wants to go in a slightly Dominant/submissive direction, this is not coming out to the fullest...On purpose? We'll see...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved It

Aside from the occasional missed word or homophone, your work is fabulous.

idrubloodidrubloodalmost 12 years ago
Nice…

Your story is becoming addictive. I like the danger of the situation where the characters can get caught. Can’t wait to see how it ends so I’m off to find out. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Mmm. I want more.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 7 years ago

Whenever I need a quick fix, I can always count on this series to give it to me. It keeps me from being A Bitch

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