All Comments on 'The Blacksmith's Daughter Ch. 01'

by HyacinthBlue

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redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

the alphas daughter?

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
You have the makings of something here.

I'll be looking for more.

NovemberwolfNovemberwolfalmost 11 years ago
Good start

Well written I'll be looking for the rest!

peachesgirlpeachesgirlalmost 11 years ago
Great start

I like your very descriptive scene set up. I can almost picture what the Inn really looks like. Cant wait to read more.

stripespuppystripespuppyalmost 11 years ago
More More More!

Wonderful imagery!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

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