All Comments on 'The Blacksmith's Daughter Ch. 01'

by HyacinthBlue

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stripespuppystripespuppyalmost 11 years ago
More More More!

Wonderful imagery!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

peachesgirlpeachesgirlalmost 11 years ago
Great start

I like your very descriptive scene set up. I can almost picture what the Inn really looks like. Cant wait to read more.

NovemberwolfNovemberwolfalmost 11 years ago
Good start

Well written I'll be looking for the rest!

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
You have the makings of something here.

I'll be looking for more.

redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

the alphas daughter?

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