All Comments on 'The Block Party'

a decent story, realistic.

Clever story and well written. Added to my favs to make it easier to find your earlier stories for later.

Hot, yet nice. And I mean that in a GOOD way. Not a common combo here at the Lit.

A very good story there Joe. I read it twice in the past few hours, and I have to say its well done. As to the whole idea of the one, I believe in it, but I believe I found mine but she left me. So in someways this story is bittersweet for me. But its still a good story.

A little gladness, a little sadness mixed with a generous dollop of lust. Just another Joe Dreamer fine read. Thank you.

This story is a little sad for me. I found The One when I was too young and left her. Now she's married to another guy and has no children(she wanted many). I see her alot and that hurts because I like him so can't be with her again. Sometimes finding theOne is both beautiful (we had it great for awhile), and sad (its been 30yrs now). Write more, you are good.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

even if the time together is brief.

This story had a great ending and an awesome sex scene. In life can you really ask for more than that?

Such a great story, the older lady got what she needed and the young man did too. Life lessons are hard to come by, that we need to seize them when they do. Well told!

Joe has a nice touch in developing characters and making them seem believable. This is all fantasy anyway so why not dream as you want to. Many of us would like to have not only sex with an older woman, but a caring relationship even if it doesn't lead to anything permanent. Stories like this one where the much younger guy ends up in a long term relationship with the older woman are just plain unrealistic and aren't really satisfying. People should stick with their own age, their own place in the world and their own kind. This may sound old stick-in-the-mud, but mix and match doesn't usually work in the real world. 5*

Joe,

I said that this was an amazing story the last time I posted, but I wanted to re-iterate it. This is an amazing tale. It is the kind of story that doesn't need a sequel, but you desire one because you want to see the reunion. Thank you!

Dreamer, you thought this was fiction? Real life may be stranger !! Anyway, thank you.

That was so good.

Really. Hard for me to imagine how that story could be improved.

You develop your characters so well.

Thanks for sharing.

Lovely enjoyable story, far superior to the usual dross on here. A pleasure to be able to give 5*

Excellent, thank you