All Comments on 'The Brake Tags'

but you should have it edited and checked for grammer. Howerver not bad for the first time work.

What the hell is a Brake Tag?! Other than wondering about that, the story was pretty good. It could've done with a bit of editing and spellchecking but was still good enough to hold my attention. Kudos.

Wow, looking at the comments below its been 15 years since anyone put one up for this story, I‘ve no what a btrak tag is but it doesn’t seem to matter, not bad plot.