All Comments on 'The Call Girl, The Lawyer, The Wife, & The Voyeur'

Good story, well written, even though I had to work at understanding the relationship among the family. But you should have indicated that this was one of a multipart story.

You need a proof reader. I gave you a 5 none the less.

Really hot story. Proof reading would definitely help! Hope to read more of your stories!!!

This could be a great story, but the writing is at best mediocre.

Also, the story starts with the main character looking for a new start (in life?), but it never says why she's on a 6 hr flight away from Boston, except that her mind is wandering when in Boston.