by mashlover1974
This could be a great story, but the writing is at best mediocre.
Also, the story starts with the main character looking for a new start (in life?), but it never says why she's on a 6 hr flight away from Boston, except that her mind is wandering when in Boston.
Really hot story. Proof reading would definitely help! Hope to read more of your stories!!!
Good story, well written, even though I had to work at understanding the relationship among the family. But you should have indicated that this was one of a multipart story.