All Comments on 'The Care Girls Ch. 02'

Although the writing style is strange, I was still able to enjoy the story. The part that I don't like is the fact that you seem to need to insult the reader if he or she doesn't choose to read the next chapter when you submit it. How about leaving that out next time?

I love the story but it is a very difficult read because you make it from the stand point thats its you and not a specific person. But Love where the story is leading. Can't wait to read the next part

VERY UNIQUE. I LIKE THE WAY YOU TRY TO MAKE THE READER A PART OF THE STORY AND ON THE WHOLE IT WORKS. GREAT STORY!!!!

What kind of question and enticement is that at the end?, Of course i'm gonna keep reading on..💜