All Comments on 'The Care Girls Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
i like the story line

i like the initial story idea. wanted to read more to see how it went

Flintstone54Flintstone54over 20 years ago
Lucy Steps across the line ...

WHOA !!! You got too turn LUCY around 90 degrees,to a parell line... Then Have him waver on the line...Its more intresting as HE trys to fool every-one ... 'N winBecky at the same time...

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