All Comments on 'The Case of the ‘Flexible’ Schedule Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Story

This story is by far the best story I have read. It was well written and exciting. Great Job

BadLt82BadLt82over 16 years ago
Hot...

Very hot, with good descriptors. Just a few problems with spelling here and there ("cloths" and "my" instead of "clothes" and "me"). Don't stop here.

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