All Comments on 'The Case of the ‘Flexible’ Schedule Ch. 02'

by Mike Franklin

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BadLt82BadLt82almost 17 years ago
Hot...

Very hot, with good descriptors. Just a few problems with spelling here and there ("cloths" and "my" instead of "clothes" and "me"). Don't stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Story

This story is by far the best story I have read. It was well written and exciting. Great Job

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