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by gaelic81

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Is the poor horse standing out in the rain?

QuantumanQuantumanalmost 13 years ago
A great start!

The horse is probably used to it! LOL

You write with terrific descriptive narrative. Include some dialogged in the coming chapters. It will draw us into the characters. As it is, we're only voyeurs peeking through the window. I want to get inside these two.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What

Why did he leave the horse

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