All Comments on 'The Champion's Companion Ch. 02'

I'm not into raping women so who would want to read about a man who rapes and that's a good thing?that's just sick.you started off with a good idea but it didn't last to long

Not enough details for full image of the act.

Enjoyed the story. Do you think you may be able to get an editor or friend to proof your work? Sometimes, it helps to put your writing down for a day or two and then pick it up again. Simply little things which interfere with the flow of the story. But not, please understand, with the essential reading enjoyment. Good luck with this series.