All Comments on 'The Chosen One'

THE CHOSEN ONES! Clever ending!

Great story line, i will read more of his stories. However his description of the sex was a let down, sorry it was rough but not sexy, it should have had me masturbating but it didn,t. I found the author from the favourites of one of my favourite authors Notlloydg, he writes about anal fucking like no one else, this author could learn a lot from him.

Pity

I really hope to read about Devlin's Philly trip.

Excellent story. I can easily see this slut fucking her way up the Corporate ladder!

Looks like Yolanda meet her freaky match in Devlin!! That was good!! Will there be more?

I'm not really into ass play, but this was well done. Loved the turnaround. The one thing that wasn't believable to me was that she wouldn't have wanted to get Devlin's snake in her pussy. (That would have made it that much hotter!)

Not my usual cup of tea in all respects, but very good, nevertheless. No, better than very good, actually. More like excellent.

"The Chosen One" is just ridiculously hot. I like the `battle of the minds` bit in finding whom tames whom.