All Comments on 'The Christmas Production'

The story is very well written, flows smoothly, and has the lightness of limited detail. What is really annoying is the ending. Fucking a virgin standing up outside a 600-person party against a bunch of crates, evaporating the next day, and the girl just shrugging it all off! This begs for revison and improvement. Please do so.

It was great until the ending. It could have been much more but the story ended in a way that makes you stop liking Tony. I liked him until he buggered off for no bloody reason.

Rather confusing. If the rewards were a trip to London that implies being set in the U.K. If set in the U.K,. the national legal age for alcohol consumption is 18. Relatively few students will be 18 by December in their final year at school, which starts in a September.