All Comments on 'The Cigarette'

I read this on my phone, so typing is a pain...

Otherwise I would gush about this story for paragraphs. What a great job setting a unique scene and givig the characters personality without needing to break the sexual tension.

Yum!

More please, ma'am. I do love this well-written and original story. Thank you!

Thank you.

I had a lesbian g f once....she was like that. Unforgettable. Thank you on bended knees.

I read this many years ago and it stayed with me, to the point that I remembered it today and went trawling though the sewers of literotica's tagging system to find it. the characters and the setting are succintly described but compelling and the emotional play is super hot. author, i don't know who or where you are but if you have any writing up anywhere else i'd love to read it.