All Comments on 'The Close Shave'

Unfortunately, if your story becomes arduous to read, I simply lose interest. Started well then suffered from too many spelling, grammatical and syntex errors. Volunteer editors?

Shaving isn't my thing but the overall story was good. As much as the waffling might bother others (see the guy below), I could see a woman introduced to that environment would act in such a way. It was true to life. There were some errors that took away from the flow, but otherwise it was a decent story.

Keep on working.

Shaving isn't my thing, otherwise the story was an interesting read. The lady's waffling was a little irritating, but that's how someone would react in a situation they're not comfortable with. The only disbelief I had was she wasn't totally comfy with being naked, but she'd let a stranger shave her. You might have taken more time to work up from being able to be naked in a work environment to trusting a guy to do it.

There were a few errors that took away from the flow, but it was not bad.

Others may like it, but it's just 'odd' to me.