All Comments on 'The Cottage'

Beautiful.

Evocative. Beautiful. You've managed to capture what D/s feels like from the inside, not what it looks like to an observer. The intimacy of giving all of herself to he who is capable, and worthy, of taking it. Well done.

A lovely story about lust and pain in a loving time. Very enjoyable

I wish this story, like their affair, could have gone on forever!! Well done, I was almost in tears, I was so impressed!

The amount of emotion you have managed to inject into a short story is overwhelming, beautiful and very sad. Well written. Thank you.

This is one of the best stories I have read on here. The imagery was beautiful and the relationship was more true to life than most of the D/s stories I have read. Great job. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Powerful erotica with beautiful, emotional imagery.

A transport of pure joy to read. Thank you.

This author is a master with dialogue and its pace. All of which leads to an excellent build-up of the heat in the story. One of MRSSMITH_SHHH's best submissions. Well-written so, you can actively imagine this as real-life.

This story cuts to the bone. The sense of loss is palpable, the loss of hope despairing.

Thank you.