All Comments on 'The Cowboy and the Biker Bitch'

by BadgerAngyl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Crumbs from the main story are not worth reading

There is just nothing in this story except some poor style like ."..44d breasts.." and it is not worth publishing clips that are intended as teasers. OK on the backcover of a book but not here on line!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Give it a chance

I think it has enormous potential. I hope you continue this story. There are so many unanswered questions. I really like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
response to feedback

thank you for your feedback. the next part will be up soon. please allow for the buildup of the story. like i said this is based on some rl but is a romantic fantasy...thank you again. I know it needs work.

BA

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