All Comments on 'The Cross Ch. 05'

Really good writing. I'm wondering where are you taking this story next.

Very good story. What's with Stephanie and dad? Is Judy going to be a long time squeeze? We want more

Definitely a very promising chapter, and I look forward to Andrew and Judy getting familiar with one another in the near future ;) Also, I agree with the previous poster about Stephanie and her dad. After the spanking incident between them, I wonder if that will be explored more in the future. That could be very interesting, to say the least ;)

You need to write more. Fabulously erotic and excellent writing.

PLEASE write more!! I'm totally engrossed with this wonderful and sexy story with all of the different paths it has taken. Also, your very accurate descriptions of older (and completely sexy) wonderful women are very alluring. I've enjoyed them EVER so much. Congratulations and I'm yearning for more!!! ..Tim

I hope there's more to the story. Have him settle down with the hiker babe.

without next chapter ! I'm gona cry ...

Thank you for a great story

One last chapter..

DOL