All Comments on 'The Curse of the Bastard Prince Ch. 03'

by prince myshkin

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Lich LordLich Lordalmost 19 years ago
Wow. Nice story. Like the ending.

Great story! Well written and totally suprising.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Sad and beautiful

Lovely work... did he impregnate the fairy? (HINT! HINT!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Amazing...

That was an absolutly amazing story...so sad yet ultimatly a perfect ending

thesorrow07thesorrow07over 16 years ago
Good ending.

Tales that end with redemption always get my vote. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW !

What a rollercoaster ride.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Dam that ending is really deep

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
interesting

You had a lot of great ideas in your story, but you should definitely get someone to proof read it before you submit it. The grammar errors and plot holes could have easily been corrected with a quick once over.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

why didn't he destroy both the pillar? who need gods?

Churchill100Churchill100over 10 years ago

Your such an idiot for writing this story!

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