All Comments on 'The Dance'

Finally, a date I'd really like to be on, one that captures all those real feelings of awkwardness and shyness, as well as what it's like to overcome them. Wonder what happens after the dance!!

The personal nature of the story gives a glimpse into the authors life.....very nice.. it leaves a lovely sense of reality.....a voyeur's delight. I look forward to the rest of the story.

Will this be the summer that all her dreams come true? I think so, as she has so much to give, and is truly a prize. May this be the year of the Locust (I say this with only the best of intentions :*)