All Comments on 'The Dancer'

have been in strip clubs but none like that that was hot hot hot

Nice concept, but very disjointed. It wasn't clear to me how or if they got on stage, or just fucked in the crowd. nobody showed any emotion, and every sentence it seemed had a personal pronoun.

Not for me

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A good read, but a a bit short. It would have been better with a little character development. Maybe, explore how watching makes the watcher feel.

Another female romantic fantasy. As erotica -- it is immature, unrealistic, boring. To each is own, which is fine. But I hardly think this is the place or category for this story.