All Comments on 'The Dante Society (third draft)'

he was once humulated by wetting his pants at a party--By no stretch is he a MASTER

I liked the way you moved into the story, setting up the fantasy component, and I was so caught up by the fantasy action that it took a moment for me to process the shift back to reality when the waitress delivered the lunch order! Excellent.

Please avail yourself of the free editorial services Literotica offers; had it not been for the many grammatical and spelling errors, I would have rated the story higher.

Please keep writing -- I want to know more about these characters.

nicely written... great foreplay!

She craves humiliation. He provided. I love stories of strong masters who appear, on the surface, to be indifferent, but when seen closely, their sometimes cruel actions are in fact fulfilled fantasies for their subs.