All Comments on 'The Dark Room'

Hi Texas_law_man,

I'm sorry the story may be brilliant, but there are so many typos and other errors, I just could not stay with it.

Wow

What a story - yes there were a few grammatical errors, but as I was reading aloud, I was able to correct.

What a marvelous dream(?) Usually the alarm goes off before the orgasm. There were so many incorrect words (misspelled) it detracted from the flow of the story. Don't be afraid to ask for someone to review.

Thanks