All Comments on 'The Deal'

You had me at "ivory nut milk." LOL.

Hot quickie with a nice twist at the end. It would be hotter, I think, if she had lost a bet, and/or if this became a regular routine where she serviced him before every game without hubby's knowledge.

but you get a four for looking after kid bro.

But gave it 4 stars because of faulty word usage in some places. It would have been interesting if wifey had accidentally left those napkins used to clean up the mess on the coffee table for hubby to pick up and use!

Ouch !

Soredick, cheating spouse, and clueless all watching the NFL. No wonder that league is run by such awful people. Look at their target audience! LMAO!!

AMerryMan

What a hot little wife ...! Can't wait for the brother in law to nail her with that big dick of his ...! What's wrong with you lot ...? next instalment please .............

i cant wait for the next chapter/s. 5 stars it is.

Dumpster fire of a story, 1 star!

Excellent! Please consider making a sequel;)

You're talented.

I hate her. She inspires passionate disdain on my part. I loathe her.

THAT, is good writing.

Doesn’t take any talent to write a simple cheating whore story.

just a nasty whore dog , cunt.