All Comments on 'The Debt Repayment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
EXCELLENT!

Excellent story. I'd love to watch my wife doing the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed

You could really take this story and expand it and go in quite a few directions. I enjoyed it but it was a little short.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
He should have just sold her

Jim should have sold Meg to Ron to repay his debt. He could have set up some type of lease, as to where she would belong to Ron for a period of time, and in that time Ron could use her as he wanted. Of Course , Meg would become a cow, and bred by Ron,and the resulting calf (child) would be Jim's responsibility to raise as Ron's property. Ron would have to train Meg to become his total slave and slut, and Jim would have no use of her for a period of time, except to furnish an environment for her to flourish and bare Ron more off-springs. At a point in time where Meg's body has become less than prefect, Ron could then terminate the contract, and Jim could take full responsibility of what is left of his used to be wife. ( A woman that has been used to the fullest for a breeder. A woman that has a pussy stretched open from child birth, and with a belly and breasts of a cow that has had many children come from her womb.A 40 something woman with 6 children all belonging to Ron.)This is a story I would like to see written, and have the story told by all three of the characters....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
HOt

I really enjoyed this story. She's a bad girl though. What happened when she got home? Was their hell to pay?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Keep On Writing !

'I enjoy writing these stories for fun for my spouse. We love to fantasize together, and that is where some of these silly little tales come from. Don't take them too seriously! I will learn what you as readers seem to enjoy and try to put more of those stories out there for you.'

Keep writing your 'silly little tales,' as you call them. I am enjoying reading them, and suspect a lot of others do too !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hummmm

That was so hot. I want to see my wife ride a big young cock. I wish I could come up with a way to. Get her to do it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i geve you 3 stars

The concept is perfect. The execution is lacking a lot, otherwise it would be 5 stars easy. The fact Ron developed a crush on her, that he saw her boob(s), the long hug...

all of that adds to the story. The husband character or the wife's one for that matter could have been more developed.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
If

If a cuck is married to a willing whore, he can always settle his gambling debts. Does someone really think this is an erotic story? Pretty sad effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You developed a nice story line that moved along until the end, sort of leaving us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Was the author jacking off while writing the story? The wife appears at Ron's house and now he is being called Jim? You know it ain't that hard to keep characters straight when you have only three Jim, Ron and Meg

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story. I would like my wife to do some similar. I would like to see him suck her tits.

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