All Comments on 'The Desert Ch. 01'

I was a bit surprised to find a story that read this well on the site. That admiration grew a bit when you stated this to be your first in English.

There are no hitches in the language or even in idiom.

I noticed your way with words from the comments you've left for other authors so I had to check out your own story. It was well done with only just a few typos. Overall, the plot was interesting and the sex very good.

Please keep up the good work and thank you for sharing

IDB.

I imagine it as myself and Daryl from the walking dead which makes it a thousand times better!! More more more!!!!!!