All Comments on 'The Devil Next Door Pt. 05'

After part 4's rousing and arousing session with Jenn, I thought the story was really heating up. I guess not. This last part, indeed, was a slapped together, rush to a finish. In the end, there is no raison d'être behind this story. What was the ultimate point of it all?

An author should have more respect for their characters and their work.

The first four chapters were Icarus flying high. This last was Icarus after meeting the sun.

I was hoping that Chris would have a good talk with Jenn and they would decide to make Katie their fuck toy. I was also hoping Jenn would fuck Katie's ass and make her an anal slut. Oh well. Can't have everything.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!