by The_Technician
This story was going so good but after all that happened the ending was a bit too abrupt.. I think you should consider other parts... But with that being said I'll admit i loved what you wrote so far!!!
I am the type of Literotica reader that scans all the New titles and descriptions for something that catches My eye in the genre that I like. I Never read the special stories written only to cover holidays or special dates... I can't say that now. I saw your author name and had to check it out and I'm glad I did. I love how you write. I don't know how much rewriting you do but the finished product is SO worth it. I see you've written another "Halloween" story.... I will read it now. Can't get enough of your style and now I will have to keep looking for your name too.
5 stars... more if it were possible.
Great story and writing, as always, but this one has longer legs than you gave it
The story is to good to let it end there.
I would love to read the sequel that details what her friends do to her and the follow up with the devil