All Comments on 'The Devil's Mark'

by The_Technician

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good but.....

This story was going so good but after all that happened the ending was a bit too abrupt.. I think you should consider other parts... But with that being said I'll admit i loved what you wrote so far!!!

DiannahDiannahover 12 years ago
VERY good!

It needs a sequel!

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
I Never......

I am the type of Literotica reader that scans all the New titles and descriptions for something that catches My eye in the genre that I like. I Never read the special stories written only to cover holidays or special dates... I can't say that now. I saw your author name and had to check it out and I'm glad I did. I love how you write. I don't know how much rewriting you do but the finished product is SO worth it. I see you've written another "Halloween" story.... I will read it now. Can't get enough of your style and now I will have to keep looking for your name too.

5 stars... more if it were possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Omigawd that was amazing!!!!!

BesoinNormal69BesoinNormal69over 9 years ago
Great story

Great story and writing, as always, but this one has longer legs than you gave it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Needs a sequel or a second chapter

The story is to good to let it end there.

minxymissminxymissalmost 6 years ago

I would love to read the sequel that details what her friends do to her and the follow up with the devil

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...