by Christian Black
zip sick male wimp cucksters aren't erotic just septicly sick writer.
Thought you knew that by now.
zip sick idiot non-grammatical comments aren't helpful just ignorant anon.
Crit doesn't sting much coming from someone who can't even string a sentence together.
Thought you knew that by now.
just to far out for my reading pleasure. please dont write anymore crap like this one is. I'll look for your name and avoind your writings
That was ridiculously well written, very erotic and you covered just about every erotic genre of note to me, a real "page turner" as it were, I couldn't stop reading. Please write more, if not with the delightful Lisa (brilliant character, by the by) then with others. Thank you very much, I'm honoured to read your work.
Eva