by Patrick-Donovan
You might have put your introduction as a long note preceding this story, so readers wouldn't have to open two stories to get the same information. It will be interesting to see if you can avoid the common horror movie sterotype stereotypes that Scary Movie so skillfully exploited!
You have me hooked. Now when is the second chapter out? Please make it soon. :)
The preveiw made me anticipate it and i must say i am impressed. I actually hope tha what sex you do have, fits with the story. I like the setting and already many ideas of what may happen are flooding my mind. I also have the great fortune to come upon this story when its all out. I look forward to the rest and i will comment on them all. God work so far.