All Comments on 'The Fall'

Interesting language. It reads as though a woman wrote it except that, in my experience, women aren't all that romantic about giving oral sex. And, from my POV, it needs to be expanded. But, it was imaginative and poetic.

More, longer.

I thought this was beautiful and similar to a beautiful dream that I have. Some women do love oral sex and having you depict it in such a soft, loving way was a nice change from most stories.